Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Poetry Potluck...


I'VE BEEN INVITED by my friend, Jingle, to join the Jingle Poetry  blog, which is posted each week from Sunday 8:00 PM thru Tuesday 8:00 PM.  This week's theme is Night, Moon, and Stars.  Please visit the site, and poets, join in!!

I'm offering a Haiku....

Dark star awakens bat
to wing into the purple
ashes of the day.


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16 comments:

Jingle said...

that's very breath taking to me,
love it absolutely, Lynn,
you are so very thoughtful and talnted.

Jingle said...

one sentence Haiku, but it evokes very stunning images in my mind. well done!
Happy Tuesday!

Lyn said...

Hi Jingle-
Thanks so much for all your encouragement for more poetry!!

Everyday Goddess said...

this feels swirly to me, with the waking/ending cycle happening all at once. very cool.

Derrick said...

Sounds dreamy to me, Lyn! "Purple ashes of the day" ... hmmm. The link you've offered doesn't want to work. I think there's one "t" too many in http ....

Lyn said...

Hi Everyday Goddess-
Swirly sounds very good to me! Thank you..

fiveloaf said...

lovely words..

Lyn said...

Hi Derrick-
Thank you..I re-did the link..maybe now..it seems to work for me..
Tech stuff..ugh!

Blue Sky Dreaming said...

I agree "purple ashes of the day"...WOW!

Jeane said...

wonderful word picture Lyn - you know how to place an idea so well xxo

Lyn said...

Hi fiveloaf-
Thanks for visiting!

Lyn said...

Hi Mary Ann-
So nice to hear from you..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi Jeane-
What a nice thing to say..I'll say the same for you!!

Sam Liu said...

"Purple ashes of the day"...those beautiful words together, they sound so perfect, so real. A wonderful haiku, Lyn.

Lyn said...

Hi Sam-
Thanks..I love the colors at the end of the day..

Kavita said...

WOW!! At last I see a bat!!! Loved this unique take on the theme!! Too good! :)
"purple ashes of the day" - really liked the way you have described the color of the night.. beautiful!!

Thank you so much for sharing this fine haiku with poetry potluck... it is our pleasure to have you here!

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