Sunday, January 20, 2013

MAGPIE...Prompt #152

 
 
 
THANK YOU, Tess, at Magpie Tales...
 
 
HOLD ON
 
Don't pull away,
we'll be alright
if you hold on.
 
That way
you can press my hand
and even
if you have to touch
your itchy nose,
 
I know how important it is
to scratch an irritation. 
 
 
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32 comments:

Other Mary said...

Your metaphor is great, hands down!

Lyn said...

Hi Other Mary-
Thumbs up on that one! Thanks!

Berowne said...

I hereby award you the "Three I's" prize: intelligent, inventive and insightful.

Kathe W. said...

Ten digits skyward- excellent!

izzy said...

Nah I won't pull away I'll drag your hand with mine! -at least that's what I used to do-:)

Brian Miller said...

ha just dont wipe your nose on my hand, please....smiles....clever...i like....

Lyn said...

Hi Berowne-
Is this the same as an Oscar? I want to thank...

Lyn said...

Hi Kathe W.-
So much inspiration in this one..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi izzy-
It's been a long time since I did that too! Thanks...

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
Thanks for reminding me of the icky part of this!! kids...

Karen S. said...

Yes, truth be told...so true, when one has an itch, they must, scratch!

SueAnn Lommler said...

Yes....it always seems that way. Hold someone's hand and all of a sudden your nose starts itching!
Ha
Hugs
SueAnn

Sienna said...

always, hold on

Lyn said...

Hi SueAnn-
It feels like my brother and me..so long ago...thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi Sienna-
That's it! Definitely!! Thank you...

Lyn said...

Hi Karen S.-
Yes, I know I do! Thanks!

Sue said...

Cute and clever.

Well done.

=)

Tess Kincaid said...

Giggle...yeah those irritations must be scratched...

Lyn said...

Hi Sue-
So glad you enjoyed it..thanks!

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
Some things can't be resisted...like your Mags!! Thanks..

Helen said...

I love this! Now, I want to hear your Oscar acceptance speech.

Lyn said...

Hi Helen-
So glad..thank you...If you've heard one Oscar speech...you've heard them all!!

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Very cute! I'll think of this when I see a little kid trying to get that irritation!!

Lyn said...

Hi Robyn-
Yes...we must be of assistance!! Thanks...

Helena said...

Neat little write! Noses are of important scratchy structure, indeed. My brother almost pulled my shoulder from its socket in times of need...lol

Kutamun said...

Your words are resonant of a certain Joseph Heller novel , though original and unique !

Lyn said...

Hi Helena-
Your brother sounds like mine! Yes, noses are important structures, indeed..thanks!!

Lyn said...

Hi Kutamun-
Heller?...guess I'll have to dig deeply..leave it to you! Thanks...

Margaret said...

Very practical :)

Carrie Burtt said...

...and that is true love indeed....love this Lyn! :-)

Lyn said...

Hi Margaret-
Not a bad way to be!!! Thanks so much..

Lyn said...

Hi Carrie-
Thanks for the lovely words..love can be simple!

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