Meal Beach, Burra Isles, Shetland/ ROBIN GOSNALL
THANK YOU, Tess, at Magpie Tales...
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Sinking, rising,
catching sight
of a footprint
in the sand.
Time cleanses,
washes away,
ceaselessly.
First wave, last surge,
a fleck of grit
finds a path,
and I sing out an Ohm.
Wrap me up
in a shell.
Tomorrow,
I yield to splendor.
In front of a window,
Vermeer's girl,
caught in a floating moment,
a pearl in her ear,
from the sinking,
from the rising.
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28 comments:
Wrap me up
in a shell.
Tomorrow,
I yield to splendor
Bask in success and enjoy it when it lasted. Nicely Lyn!
Hank
really nice slip in there of the girl with the pearl earring...a very cool painting...also like the meditation by the ocean...it is often that for me...smiles.
Beautifully done, Lyn, say gday to Jack Sparrow from me !
Hi kaykuala-
Very good advice! thank you, Hank...
Hi Brian-
Yes..the ocean is a reverie..sort of floated along with that grain of sand...till it became a pearl!! thank you...
Hi Kutamun-
Hi to Jack..just a speck on the horizon! Thanks...
Love the transition from sea to pearl and Vermeer between...
Hi Tess-
It's funny what we see, where we go..many thanks!
"Tomorrow,
I yield to splendor."
Super nice turn of phrase there.
And I especially liked the ending, too.
=)
...and she shall treasure that pearl and all her days forever more! Your words are waves rocking the soul of our day!
Great love Vermeer's girl;(Pearl) and the shell reference! thanks-
That's beautiful. I love how you went from the sea to the painting... just so cool!
Love the pearl insert and the feeling of ease that you've portrayed.
Calming as the waves.
Hi Sue-
Really love your comment..thank you!
Hi Karen S.-
Such real spirituality to your comment...thanks!
Hi izzy-
Love that girl...thanks!!
Hi Other Mary-
I just dived right in...thank you!!
Hi Tumblewords-
The sea will do it every time! thank you...
Hi Laurie-
I see you caught one of those waves..thanks!
Yeilding to spledora...what a beautiful thought...this is lovely Lyn! :)
I like the subliminal glimpses you share here- the footstep in the sand, Vermeer's girl. Nicely done.
meditations on natures power
Wonderful waving poem!
Hi Carrie-
Thanks so much for your kind words!
Hi Little Nell-
Thanks...I felt I needed to tie things together...
Hi Emma-
Welcome and thank you so much! And power it is!!
Hi ~T~
Thank you..and the poem is waving back!!
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