Sunday, May 26, 2013

MAGPIE...Prompt #170



                                                             PONYTAIL/ Last Exit


THANK YOU, Tess...at Magpie Tales...


BEGINNING

Before your face took shape
I saw a flow of will erupt,
nodded yes my baby,
I feel your heart alongside mine.

That vortex on the silver screen
is the spot where a blue eye will cry
if love doesn't pour over you,
run down each step of your being.

When your raven hair unravels,
I'll place a ribbon, invisible,
in a loop
that ties you close to me,

see to it that all love
decants like wine,
flows your way...
nine months to go.


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27 comments:

Charleen said...

This is so sweet. Its a poem to keep and reread. Thank you for sharing.

Lyn said...

Hi Charleen-
What a nice thing to say! Thanks so much...

Berowne said...

Beautifully ingenious...

Helen said...

I have pondered this image for a while this morning ... I think you captured the essence. I see what you see, Lyn.

Karen S. said...

So very touching, and filled with loving joy... to arrive soon! I like your vision!

Lyn said...

Hi Berowne-
How elegant..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi Helen-
I saw a tadpole sort of eye right away..funny about this stuff! Thanks...

Lyn said...

Hi Karen S.
Thanks for your kind words...sort of fell into place!!

Brian Miller said...

ah lovely...nine months of anticipation at that...you do capture a bit of the magic of the pic...and of love that creates...

dori said...

Oh my god was that gorgeous! Wow, I hope many people get to read this one.

Other Mary said...

Oh my, what a lovely response to this image. So tender...wonderful.

mindlovemisery said...

This is exquisite! Charleen is correct its the kind of poem you want to read again and again there is a wonderful aura about it

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
Very nice words...thank you so much!

Lyn said...

Hi dori-
Extremely nice comment..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi Other Mary-
It sort jumped out at me..thanks for your kindness...

Lyn said...

Hi mindlovemisery-
Such lovely words..thanks so much...

Kutamun said...

I think you have given birth to something very beautiful here, my friend....such tender feeling

Lyn said...

Hi Kutamun-
Good for us..we do go on!! thanks so much...

Helena said...

I love this. It sort of ties in to my post today and has left me a bit emotional. I shall be back for second and third helpings of this fine piece. Thanks, Lyn.

Lyn said...

Hi Helena-
Lovely..thanks for this comment..

Dave King said...

Excellent poem that works very well. Loved the unexpectedness of some of the lines.

Lyn said...

Hi Dave-
Very encouraging words! Thanks so much..

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Incredibly beautiful!

Anna :o]

Lyn said...

Hi hyperCRYPTICal-
Wow! Who could ask for more? Thank you....

Tess Kincaid said...

Beautiful unexpected ending...

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
Thank you..as so often happens, the words are a surprise to me too!!

kaykuala said...

Full of anticipation and full of love. Motherhood is a noble assignment that only mothers can fully narrate with pride! Nicely Lyn!

Hank

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