Monday, July 29, 2013

MAGPIE...Prompt #179



THANK YOU, Tess, for Magpie Tales...


BECOMING DELUSIONAL

Taking a deep breath
like a comedian high
on inhaled helium
filling a red balloon,

I'm nesting in
a new-fangled identity.

Changing my voice,
fooled my lover,
kissing a new Spiderman
on the web.

What's the matter
if there is no matter,
Einstein's laughing,
just as lofty as me.

Playing games
with the gravity of it all,
double entendres
all over the place.

I leap frog
over poetic impediments,
craft is empty,

invisible me
steering a skill
full of hot air.

Forgotten all together
the witty driver
of yesterday.
Monday morning,
me, dimly plotting.


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26 comments:

Helen said...

If Michael Stipe and R.E.M. were still together ~~~~ they would SO sing this one!!!

Trellissimo said...

Yes! Helen thinks this is lyrical and I agree.

Lyn said...

Hi Helen-
Now I'm in heaven! Thanks...a long time ago..me/lyrics, my partner/music..then he became a star..end of partnership/stiill a star!! Hey, you never know!!

Lyn said...

Hi Trellissimo-
Thanks so much!! Can you sing...I can't!

Jinksy said...

This was a delight to the ears,and the tongue as it danced through your words. :)

Lyn said...

Hi Jinksy-
How nice of you to say this..thank you!!

Truedessa said...

I really enjoyed this one..I agree it has a lyrical feel.

Kutamun said...

Looks like you had no trouble rising above it all !

Lyn said...

Hi Truedessa-
Love your name..thanks so much!!

Lyn said...

Hi Kutamun-
Thanks..always, onward and upward!

Laurie Kolp said...

Delightful... I especially like-

I'm nesting in
a new-fangled identity

Brian Miller said...

ha. fabulous word play in this....love the rhythm and cadence...oh i love the einstein stanza....craft is empty is a popper of a line too...wicked fun...

dori said...

What's great about this poem is that it could end at any segment. It's so whimsical and giddy that it's nonsensical ways leave you satisfied wherever you being or end. Love it.

Lyn said...

Hi Laurie-
So glad you enjoyed this..and that new-fangled identity!!

Lyn said...

Hi Brian-
More than kind..It's fun I'm after, though sometimes looks serious...naaahhh..thank you!

Lyn said...

Hi dori-
Wow...so interesting....that it could end at any point...so Zen...thank you..I'm usually looking for one more beginning!!

Margie said...

What can I say except I loved this!
Simply awesome!

Lyn said...

Hi Margie-
I so appreciate your comment! Thanks so much...

Jerry E Beuterbaugh said...

Very well done!

Lyn said...

Hi Jerry-
Thanks so much for the visit and your kind words!

Other Mary said...

I just love the lines:

I'm nesting in
a new-fangled identity.

And so many others too...the new spiderman, and all the other fun wordplay!

Lyn said...

Hi Other Mary-
Thank you..I think I uncovered a stand-up routine!!

Helena said...

This definitely goes into my favourites list! Such magical words!!

Lyn said...

Hi Helena-
Oh my, I'm so pleased you liked this..having some fun...thank you so much!

Tess Kincaid said...

Delusion is good for the soul...love this...

Lyn said...

Hi Tess-
You're my kind of gal...thanks!!

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